Comments on: What is wrong with this sentence? He wants to become a doctor his family insists he study law? http://www.familylawmadeeasy.com/blog/what-is-wrong-with-this-sentence-he-wants-to-become-a-doctor-his-family-insists-he-study-law/ Tue, 22 May 2012 11:42:57 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: raichasays http://www.familylawmadeeasy.com/blog/what-is-wrong-with-this-sentence-he-wants-to-become-a-doctor-his-family-insists-he-study-law/comment-page-1/#comment-1098 raichasays Sun, 01 Feb 2009 12:40:48 +0000 http://www.familylawmadeeasy.com/blog/what-is-wrong-with-this-sentence-he-wants-to-become-a-doctor-his-family-insists-he-study-law/#comment-1098 Dude--why do you keep posting grammar questions in the law and ethics section? See the use of the dash? A possibility to correct your sentence. Or a semicolon. Now, take your homework assignment to correct category! Dude–why do you keep posting grammar questions in the law and ethics section?

See the use of the dash? A possibility to correct your sentence.

Or a semicolon.

Now, take your homework assignment to correct category!

]]> By: jurydoc http://www.familylawmadeeasy.com/blog/what-is-wrong-with-this-sentence-he-wants-to-become-a-doctor-his-family-insists-he-study-law/comment-page-1/#comment-1097 jurydoc Sat, 31 Jan 2009 08:15:38 +0000 http://www.familylawmadeeasy.com/blog/what-is-wrong-with-this-sentence-he-wants-to-become-a-doctor-his-family-insists-he-study-law/#comment-1097 It is a run on. I would add a semi-colon after doctor since the two phrases are independent (subject and verb) but related. It is a run on. I would add a semi-colon after doctor since the two phrases are independent (subject and verb) but related.

]]> By: aiya http://www.familylawmadeeasy.com/blog/what-is-wrong-with-this-sentence-he-wants-to-become-a-doctor-his-family-insists-he-study-law/comment-page-1/#comment-1096 aiya Fri, 30 Jan 2009 16:40:31 +0000 http://www.familylawmadeeasy.com/blog/what-is-wrong-with-this-sentence-he-wants-to-become-a-doctor-his-family-insists-he-study-law/#comment-1096 I would think it's a run on. I would add a period after doctor. I would think it’s a run on. I would add a period after doctor.

]]> By: badmotherrucker http://www.familylawmadeeasy.com/blog/what-is-wrong-with-this-sentence-he-wants-to-become-a-doctor-his-family-insists-he-study-law/comment-page-1/#comment-1095 badmotherrucker Tue, 27 Jan 2009 07:22:01 +0000 http://www.familylawmadeeasy.com/blog/what-is-wrong-with-this-sentence-he-wants-to-become-a-doctor-his-family-insists-he-study-law/#comment-1095 I'm not an English major, but I would have added a comma, and a but. I’m not an English major, but I would have added a comma, and a but.

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